When blogging about rhetoric, it forces the author to reflect on his or her own use of rhetoric. For instance, I must always ask myself: what is the exigence for my writing? In other words, what prompts my writing? The class schedule requires that I perform a weekly blog post, and if it wasn't for my desire to earn a good grade in this class, I would not write these posts. Hence, the exigence is the class requirement combined with my determination to earn a high grade. In addition, this is an extension of my determination to earn a Master's degree; I want to learn about the art of teaching writing so that I can better serve my students. The more my students will learn, the better society and future generations will be. Thus, in a way, the exigence for my blogs stems from my desire to see a better and brighter future.
Another question I constantly ask myself is: who is my audience, and what is my purpose for writing to them? At times, I write for my teacher. Other times, I write for future employers that may look upon my writing. In addition, I write for myself so that I may be able to look upon these blog posts in the future and refresh my memories. And finally, I write so that my future students can visit my blog and read my reflections on rhetoric. Trying to juggle these different audiences can be difficult and even contradictory. For instance, what I write as a reminder to myself in the future may not be the same thing I would write to a prospective employer. These different audiences forces me to write as different speakers.
Because I write for four audiences, I have to code-switch between the way I write. For example, if I write for my teacher, I write in a more formal, academic tone. When I write for myself, I write using a shorthand that I would be able to understand: self-comprehension would be my main focus. When writing for future students, I write as an authority figure disseminating information on rhetoric. And finally, when I write to prospective employers, I write very formally as an authority figure using academic language and focusing on theoretical rather than practical applications.
The depth of my exigency and the constant shifting of audience provide an overview of my rhetorical process while blogging. The speaker and audience is in constant flux while the exigency remains the same. The purpose may change, but the motivation doesn't. This may lead to a disjunction among my blog posts as one may be informal and shorthand while another may be formal and employ copious amounts of academic language. Overall, I try to produce the best writing I can regardless of which audience I am primarily writing for.
Thursday, October 30, 2014
Thursday, October 23, 2014
Arguing in print, online, and face-to-face
In Theresa Enos and Shane Borrowman’s article “Authority and
Credibility,” the authors synthesize the classical definitions of ethos with
the emerging importance of online sources.
This article inspired me to create an activity based on their assertion
that “students often intuitively work through issues of credibility. They know, for example, that Time is a better
source than The Daily Wildcat…They know that neither is as good as an article
from a scholarly journal or new anthology published by a university press”
(107). The activity is an introduction
to ethos, and it begins with the class brainstorming different sources of
getting news. After a student finishes
writing all of the different types of sources on the board, students will get
into groups and arrange the list in order of least credible to most credible
news sources on the board. Afterwards,
we will debrief on the lists and discuss the role and importance of credibility
in developing an argument.
Gesa E. Kirsch and Jacqueline J. Royster’s article “Feminist
Rhetorical Practices: In Search of Excellence” inspired me to have students
write a reflection throughout their papers.
It was refreshing to have the author write their reflection as I read
because it offered me an insight on the author’s thought process. This reflection will help students become
even more conscious of their writing process through reflecting on their
writing and thinking-process. In this
manner, a writing assignment can turn into a meta-writing assignment where
students reflect on their writing process.
Bo Wang’s article “Engaging
Nuquanzhuyi: The Making of a Chinese Feminist Rhetoric” was a little
disappointing. It was refreshing to step
into the point of view of a marginalized group of people, but the
subject-matter was a little out of touch with contemporary feminist theory in
China due to the fact that the author chose to focus on feminist writings from
the early twentieth century. With the scarcity
of women in China, women have gained more power. It would have been interesting to see how the
significant gender imbalance in China has contributed to the female perspective
on rhetoric. In this manner, the article
was slightly disappointing.
My favorite reading this week, Brian Jackson and Jon Wallin’s
“Rediscovering the ‘Back-and-Forthness’ of Rhetoric in the Age of YouTube,”
focused on the difference between arguing in an academic paper, arguing online,
and arguing in face-to-face scenarios.
The article argues that although academic institutions are great at
having students produce argumentative writing, they are neglecting the equally
if not more, important medium of arguing online and face-to-face. Coming from a high school teacher’s
perspective, the common core standards require that students collaborate and
argue with each other throughout their high school career. However, it is rare that teachers require
students to argue online. Although it is
a rough outline, I believe that teachers can design activities that require
students to either write blog responses to other students’ blogs they disagree
with or require students to make an argument to a real-world organization in
the community. These activities would
help empower students’ voice and provide a meaningful learning opportunity
respectively. Overall, these readings
helped me develop three in-class activities that will help my students
understand and employ rhetoric better.
Saturday, October 11, 2014
How much should you know about me?
I found Stephanie Kerschbaum’s article “On Rhetorical Agency
and Disclosing Disability in Academic Writing” fascinating. Like the Kerschbaum, I was offended how
people (some close and some not so close to the author) suggest that she
mentions her disability in her writing.
It challenges the notion that the writing is adequate on its own. It also calls special attention to those
writing about people with special needs.
For example, authors in African-American studies don’t have to reveal
whether or not they are black, authors of violence of against women texts don’t
have to reveal whether or not they were domestically or sexually assaulted, and
authors writing about gender don’t have to reveal which gender they more
associate with. This resonates with her
declaration that, “Why am I always asked to talk about my deafness? Why not about my race or my gender or
sexuality? Nobody has ever said to me, ‘So
how does your gender play into this theory?’” (67). However, Kerschbaum relates how writers of
disability studies face direct or indirect pressure to reveal either their
specific disability or their relative with a disability. This is definitely a form of discrimination
in the academic world.
I found it fascinating that Kerschbaum comes to the
realization amid her academic career that revealing or not revealing one’s disability
in their writing is a strategic choice on the author’s part. I also found the following claim and rationale
intriguing, “Because disability is a contested site upon which identity claims
are made…disability self-disclosures are a prime location where academic
writers assert themselves and give texture to their identity claims” (61). Kerschbaum makes the claim that disability is
so intertwined with one’s identity that it would be difficult to separate the
disability from the person. I don’t know
how much I agree with that claim.
However, she simultaneously mentions how the acknowledgement of one’s
disability is a form of empowerment that can act as a sort of membership in a
particular subset of the academic community.
In other words, claiming one’s identity could be empowering or demeaning
depending on how the author perceives it.
Claiming one’s disability can also backfire. Kerschbaum mentions how an audience could
understand the writing as a self-empowering piece where the only praise the
author receives is that he or she is “brave” for writing about their
disability. I love how Kerschbaum then
makes the academic distinction between the body and the mind, and when should
the body come in in topics of the mind?
Kerschbaum’s writing begs the question as to how much the audience
should know about the person who wrote an article and why should it
matter? What is salient and not salient
to disclose? And, how can we make that
distinction? Her article forces us, as
readers, to evaluate how much of ourselves we disclose in our writing as well
as why we do or do not do it. It also
calls into questions how much of an author do you need to understand before you
read their article. The ideas,
questions, and struggles in this article will stay with me for a long time.
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